thinking (free verse poem)

[karri]

Thinking
Thinking of someting
The hours it takes
the hope that is lost
when your brain is bloked

a littel encouragement needed
hope is regaind
thoughts flow freely
coverted on to paper

memories are lost
when you let go of thought
they are helpful
especialy when they are needed

[ZeroEverlast]

Sorry, prose doesn't impress me.

Your approach to poetry is too direct. If you're going to say things like they are, might as well write fiction instead.

[Kinetic]

Wow...you're so blunt zeroeverlast... -_-

Blank verse poetry is ok. I'm getting the impression that the person is depressed and he/she has difficuly expressing his/her feelings? I dunno...