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InuYashaCool
09-10-2006, 09:00 PM
here's a poem i made up

today, tommorow, yesterday,
tick tock tick tock the clock ticks and tocks
seconds turn into minutes and minutes turn into hours
before you know it today becomes tommorow
and today becomes yesterday
tick, tock, tick, tock

i think its pretty good i just came up with it so im sry if its not that good:o :o

ZeroEverlast
09-11-2006, 02:29 AM
It's much much much much much much much much much much much much much much better than most of the crappy emo fare we usually get around here.

Good work, InuYashaCool.

InuYashaCool
09-11-2006, 09:02 PM
thx i just thought of it and i thought it was kinda cheesy when i was typing it

Blade_of_Sorrows
09-16-2006, 02:00 PM
wow u haven't done that in a long time.
U havent written since u lost ur memory stick

littletokyo
09-16-2006, 05:14 PM
tis ok to me

InuYashaCool
09-17-2006, 03:39 AM
thx

demontenchi
10-15-2006, 08:47 PM
OMFL Zero gave u a comment a good one to

littletokyo
10-15-2006, 10:45 PM
i love to mack poems^*^

Anime_Demoness
10-15-2006, 11:16 PM
poetry brings out ones heart...and not in a bloody way
it was really nice Inuyashacool:)

InuYashaCool
11-12-2006, 05:00 PM
yah DemonTenchi I can't Believe it either