The Key Charm [chapters 1+2]

[MidnightSun]

main charactor: Midnight
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Chapter 1
It was cold, dreary and dark by the ocean that December night. Midnight was standing on the shore looking out into the night. She held her necklace in her hand. She was lost. Not physically lost like little toddlers in the mall but inside………she had no one. The only ones where Talim and Ana. The sixteen year old had been through a lot in the past year. The necklace she held in the hand was of a silver key.

“Midnight!” she heard Ana’s voice shouting.
“Ana. How are you?” Midnight said softly turning towards her friend.
“I’m good. Why are you out here? Why aren’t you in bed?”
“Why do you ask so many questions?” Midnight asked laughing softly.
They were silent for a few minutes.
Talim walked up to the two. “Come on, girls.” Talim said, “It is really late.”
Talim and Ana raced to the little house they all lived in together, while Midnight walked behind. She looked at the key still on her palm. Suddenly a man in a black coat appeared and grabbed her by an arm.
“Ah!” Midnight shouted, but Ana and Talim were too far away to hear.
“Who are you?!” Midnight shouted, “What do you want, you creep?!”
“You don’t remember anything do you?” the man said, “Humph, what a waist.” He lifted his hand and was about to strike. But then another man appeared with a sword and fought the man with Midnight in his grip.
The first man disappeared. The second looked over his shoulder to look back at her. His hood was open just enough for her to see his blue eyes.
“The key.” was all the man said and then faded away into the darkness.
Midnight looked back down into her hands.
“Midnight!” Ana called, “Come on Slow Poke!”
“ I’m coming!” Midnight shouted.


Chapter 2
Chapter 2
That night, Midnight didn’t sleep at all. Who was the man? What did he need? And why her? “Midnight?” Ana asked walking into the room.
“Yes, Ana?” Midnight asked.
“What’s going on?” Ana asked, “You’ve been acting bizarre lately. Is something troubling you?”
“The key……” Midnight said, “The key must mean something.”
“Who said?”
“The guy who saved me, with the blue eyes.”
“Blue eyed man? Who in the world are you talking about?!”
“In the world….he’s not from this one! Maybe another one?”
“Please! Will you tell me-?”
“Thanks Ana!” Midnight said running out the door.
“You’re……welcome?”

Midnight ran out the door and there he was. “You!” she shouted.
He turned his head to look at her.
“You are you?”
“That is of now importance.” he said, turning his head back around.
“What do you mean?” she asked, “That man…….what did he mean…I don’t remember?”
“You’re true past.”
“Huh?”
The man was silent.
“Then were do you come in?” Midnight asked, “In my past?”
“Just a figment of your memory, humph, as if you had one.”
“And the key?”
She felt to her neck to see if it was there. But it wasn’t.
The man lift his hand. He had it.
“It’s a pretty piece of metal.” he said, “But it holds power.” He through it up and snatched in his hands.
“Power?”
“This is but a fragment of the key blade.”

[MidnightSun]

Chapter 3
“The key blade?”
He through the necklace to her.
He nodded.
She put it on and it started to glow.
“What the heck?!”
The man’s eyes grew even a brighter blue.
There was a bright white flash.



She appeared in a town. But it wasn’t her’ s.
“Hello?” Midnight shouted, “Anyone there?”
A girl walked up to her.
“Can you tell me where I am?” Midnight asked.
“Welcome to Rayne’s Town.” the girl said, “I’m Valia. Do you have a name?”
“Yes, I’m Midnight. Nice to meet you.”
They started walking.
“So this is Rayne’s Town?” Midnight asked.
“Yes.”
“Are you the only one who lives here?”
“Nah,” she answered, “I live with my friend, Hikaru. There are quite a few others though.”
“Oh.”
“So how did you get here?” Valia asked
“That’s what I want to know.” Midnight answered.
“Oh….I’m sorry.” Valia responded.
“Don’t be.”
They came up to a little house.
“Come on in.” Valia said opening the door.

Chapter 4
A girl was working on the computer when they walked in.
“Hey, Hikaru. Any updates?” Valia asked.
“No.” Hikaru answered.
“Well, this is Midnight.” Valia introduced.
Hikaru turned her chair around.
“Hi.” Hikaru said.
“So, what are you looking for updates on?” Midnight asked.
“Mysterious creatures attacking randomly at different locations.” Hikaru said turning around and typing into the computer.
“Really?” Midnight asked, “How can you track something like that?”
“Well, we can’t really.” Hikaru explained, still typing, “ But we are contacting different people to tell us when they attack.”
“If we get enough data over and over again” Valia said, “We can predict where and when they will.”
“Interesting.” Midnight responded.
A video message popped up on the screen.
The video was of a blonde aired man, and at the bottom it said : Cid Highwind- Radiant Garden.
“Hey Cid, any updates?” Hikaru asked.
“Yes. The heartless are attacking know, bur Leon, Yuffie, Cloud, and Aerith are taking care of it.” Cid answered.
“Good.” she answered, “What about Merlin?”
“He’s out there to. I have to go kick some booty, see yaw!” he answered and the video went off.
“There’s an update.” Hikaru said looking at Valia.
Valia rolled her eyes.
“Heartless?” Midnight asked.
“Those pests we told you about.” Valia answered.
“Oh.” Midnight said.
“They’re attracted to the key blade.” Hikaru said.
Midnight grabbed her necklace.
“What’s wrong?” Valia asked. She walked up to her and saw the necklace. “The key charm!” Hikaru shouted.
“Where did you get this?” Valia asked.
“I don’t know, I’ve had it for as long as I can remember.” Midnight answered.
“Did heartless attack your world?” Hikaru asked.
“No.” Midnight answered, “But will they? What about my friends?”
Hikaru and Valia looked at each other.
“Sorry,” Valia answered, “I don’t really know.”


Chapter 5
Mean while, It was a beautiful day in Destiny Islands.

“Sora!” Kairi called out, “Sora where are you?!”

“I’m over here!” Sora answered.
Kairi ran over to Sora, who was sitting on the beach with his friend Riku.
“Good afternoon.” Riku said, laying back into the sand.
“Have you seen Goofy or Donald any where?” Kairi asked.
“No,” Sora answered, “Why do you ask?”
“Well,” Kairi answered, “It was there turn to clean up! But instead me and the king had to do it AGAIN!!”
“They may have just forgot, Kairi.” Sora responded.
“Yeah, for the third time in a row!” Kairi said.
King Mickey walked up. “I found them Kairi.” he said, “Don’t worry. Sora, I have urgent news.”
“What is it, king?” Sora asked, standing up.
Riku stood up also.
“There is a fragment of the key blade called a key charm.” Mickey said.
“Really? Who has it?” Riku asked.
“I’m not to sure.” he answered.
“What if it falls into the wrong hands?” Kairi asked.
Sora pulled out the key blade.
“Then I’ll knock some sense into ‘em.” he said.
“And so will I.” Riku added.
“Well,” Kairi said, “What are we waiting for?”
“I’ll go get Donald, Goofy, and the gummi ship.” Mickey said.
He went away.
“Ready for another adventure?” Riku asked.



Chapter 6
“This is what’s attracting the heartless!” Hikaru said.
“And if Sora finds out,” Valia added, “He’ll come looking for the charm and even more heartless will appear!”
“Hey I didn’t ask for this!” Midnight shouted.
“We know you didn’t. But for the sake of the town, and all of us….you better leave.” Hikaru said.
Midnight ran out of the house.
She had no clue where she was going, be that didn’t stop her.
She saw Riku, Sora, Kairi, and Mickey, but she was just going to run pass them.
But when she was, Riku moved in front of her and stopped her.
“Whoa there!” he said, while her momentum made an impact on his chest, “Oof!”
Riku was holding her by her arms.
“Let…go of me!” Midnight shouted.
She was bent over and her head was at Mickey’s level.
He saw her necklace. “She’s the one!” he said.
“What….are you…..talking about?!” Midnight said, struggling some more.
“Release her Riku.” Mickey told him. He did as he was told.
“Thank you.” Midnight said getting to her feet.
“You have the key charm.” Mickey said.
“Yes,” Midnight replied, “I know that.”
“How long?” Sora asked.
“For about five minutes now.” Midnight answered, “What’s it to you?”
Sora held out his hand and the key blade appeared in it.
“You’re the key blade master?” Midnight asked.
Sora nodded, “I’m Sora.”
“I’m Kairi,” Kairi said, “This is King Mickey, and Riku.”
“Nice to meet you.” Midnight said.
“So you just found out about the charm?” Sora asked.
“Great,” Riku said sighing, “She wields something powerful and doesn’t know how to use it.”
“You hush up.” Midnight told him.
Heartless appeared.
Sora pulled out his key blade.
“How am I supposed to fight?” Midnight asked.
Her necklace stared to glow and a sword type key blade appeared in her hands.
“Just use that.” Sora told her.

They defeated all of the heartless.
“What is that?” Sora asked.
Midnight handed it to Mickey. “I’ve never seen anything like it.” Mickey said.
“A type of key blade maybe?” Riku asked. “Maybe.” Mickey said.


Chapter 7
They went to where Donald and Goofy were. “What is this thing?” Midnight asked. “A gummi ship.” Donald answered.
“Wow.” Midnight replied.
“So you can come with us to Radiant Garden to fight the Heartless.” Goofy said.
“Do you know anyone there?” Kairi asked.
“I saw a man named Cid, I heard of Leon, Yuffie, Cloud, Aerith, and Merlin.” Midnight answered.
“Good.” Sora answered.
“Who are they?”
“Our friends.” Sora answered.
“Oh.”

“Are you ready to
leave?” Riku asked.
Midnight nodded.




Chapter 8
They arrived in Radiant Garden.
They went to the center of the town.
Cloud was standing right there.
“Cloud.” Sora said walking up to him.
“Sora,” he said, “Haven’t seen you around here.”
“Where are the others?” Mickey asked.
“There at Merlin’s. But Leon’s over there messing with Ansem’s computer.” he answered.
Sora, Kairi, and the others walked past him. When Midnight did, he shot a glare at her. She saw his eyes and walked away.
They walked into the house.
“Sora! Donald! Goofy!” Yuffie shouted.
“Hey Yuffie .” Goofy said.
“Who’s this?” Aerith asked.
“Midnight.” Midnight said.
“Have I seen you somewhere before?” Cid asked her.
“On Rayne’s Town’s web cam.” she answered. “Oh.” he replied.
“Leon is down messing with that computer.” Merlin said, “He was down there all night.”
“Midnight, will you go find him?” Mickey asked.
Midnight nodded and walked out the door.
She came to the computer room.
“Are you Leon?”
“Yes,” Leon answered, “Need something?”
“Sora told me to come find you.”
She walked over to the computer while he punched in some stuff.
“What are you doing?” she asked.
“Just trying to figure some things out.” he answered.
“Interesting.” Midnight replied, “You look really tired.”
“I am.” Leon answered.
“Can I try?”
“Knock your self out.” he answered.
Midnight bent over and typed in the words ‘key charm’.
Several pictures popped up on the screen.
“What the-?” Leon responded.
He ran over to the computer.
“The key charm?” he read off the screen.
“This.” Midnight said, showing him her necklace.
“A fragment of the key blade.” he said, looking at the necklace, holding it.
He dropped it.
They walked back outside.
Heartless appeared. Midnight and Leon started fighting side by side.
They defeated them all.
“I almost forgot.” Leon said, “What’s your name?”
“I’m Midnight.” she answered.
Donald and Goofy ran out of the house.
“What’s all the commotion?” Donald asked.
“What happened out here?” Goofy asked.
“Just heartless.” Leon answered, “Let’s go back in Merlin’s.”
“I think I’ll walk around.” Midnight said.


Chapter 9
She walked past Cloud.
He grabbed her fore arm clinging tight.
“What the-?”
“Who are you?” he asked.
“Wh-?
“I said, who are you?!” he shouted.
“I-I’m Midnight.” she answered.
“Where did you come from?” he asked.
“I’m from Guardian Island.”
“Do you know Sepheroth?”
Before she could answer.
“Where is he?!” Cloud said.
“I don’t know what you’re talking about!” she shouted.
She ran away.
“Maybe she isn’t the one.” He thought.

[warangel]

Needs action scenes. You shouldn't just write, they killed the heartless. Change through to threw. Other than that, I want to read more.

[Kiddoh]

~facepalm~