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Black Ashes
04-08-2007, 03:23 AM
rain drops fall,
just out my window,
the moon shining bright.
i wanna run in it,
i wanna walk in it.
rain drops fall,
hitting the window pain.
it falls hiding the tears.
the heart breaks in two,
as the lighting flashes.
the thunder rolls,
and the water flows.
i dance and skip,
hiding the thing i cry for.
behind me it runs and hides.
never going to be seen,
not wanting to be seen.
i dance for it,
keeping it safe.
i dance as sweet and soft,
as the rain upon my face.
it howls as i stop,
it's rage becomeing known.
in a flash it jumps upon you,
my presence now known.
i claw and bite,
you'll never get away from me.
the thunder rumbles,
as it vanishes,
i dance once more.
the beast now subdued once again.
i bow as you die,
a smirk upon my face,
revenge can be sweet.

CorruptedPlague
04-08-2007, 03:26 AM
id give it a 10 out of 5

hungrykirby
04-08-2007, 03:28 AM
i give it a 100 out of 5

Black Ashes
04-08-2007, 03:30 AM
thanks boys! ^-^ i'll post another one if you want..do you?

CorruptedPlague
04-08-2007, 03:32 AM
yes please

hungrykirby
04-08-2007, 03:33 AM
hell yeah

Kosugi
04-08-2007, 03:34 AM
Hells yeah, yup

hungrykirby
04-08-2007, 03:35 AM
lol

Devil Rinnah
04-08-2007, 04:15 AM
Yes please

hungrykirby
04-08-2007, 04:43 AM
wohoo!!! lol

Hion
04-08-2007, 04:45 AM
It's good Baby

Anastashia Sage
04-08-2007, 07:06 AM
10/10