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KatandMouse
03-20-2007, 05:56 AM
"I stare off into the moonlight,
It warms my skin,
Even though the night is cold.
But I feel sorrow.

I never should have asked.
I'm sorry I made you sad,
I'm sorry.
I didn't think.
It was careless.

But at least I understand.
I know why you're the way you are.
It makes you you.
And I'm sorry that it hurts.

I'm sorry that I asked,
Because it hurt me to hurt you.

Now I understand.
I know why you are you.

But I'm still sorry that I asked.
I'm sorry that it hurts,
And I'm sorry that I made you think about it.
I never should have asked..."

Sanosuke
03-20-2007, 05:58 AM
Nice poem. :)

BeatleMania
04-02-2007, 05:37 AM
very nice

tsuyoshi
04-02-2007, 05:52 AM
awesome poem, great job

Black Ashes
04-02-2007, 06:09 AM
i would have to say it's not the best i've seen you do k@ but you can feel the emotion behind it. so yes, it is good.

BeatleMania
04-02-2007, 06:29 AM
if I was really that good at poetry I'd probably had more songs written by now
so I could say your probably the best poet I know

Kosugi
04-03-2007, 02:15 AM
I don't have to be good at poetry to see this is a good poem

CoreyBato
04-03-2007, 04:37 AM
*sniff sniff*
I think I just cried a little. This is not very manly of me.
*sniff sniff*