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KatandMouse
03-19-2007, 10:35 PM
"My heart is beating hard,
My pulse is racing,
I can see that crimson blood,
I can almost taste it on my lips.

But I must hold back,
For they do not know what I am,
If they knew,
They would hate me.

Blood...
That crimson blood...

Sweet blood.
It looks better than chocolate.
I want to drink it,
Swallow in great gulps.

I cannot fight this any more.
It pulls me to it.

I find myself losing control.
I can feel my fangs sinking deep into flesh.

Crimson blood...
It washes over my tongue,
And I feel as if I have gone to a better place.

Then I realize what I have done.
He is cold in my arms.
He is dead,
For I have drunk him dry.

Oh sweet crimson blood,
What have I done?"

For those of you who wanted more vampire poems... Your wish, is my command. ^-^

staticgrave666
03-19-2007, 10:48 PM
Wow, that one was the best yet! It really got under my skin lol

Black Ashes
03-20-2007, 12:30 AM
actually if you ask me she could of dran it out alittle more. i mean she could of given the guy some more emotion, but yes it is good.

Sanosuke
03-20-2007, 02:46 AM
Hmmm I wonder what inspired this one. Oh wait maybe I know. haha :shh: Cannot tell you. haha I like it. Really good, better than your other ones in my opinion. ^-^

z311y
03-20-2007, 02:47 AM
Vampire poems, not my thing... Lol.

KatandMouse
03-20-2007, 03:49 AM
You hate vampires, Zell. ^-^

And yes, Sano. Among other things, that WAS one of them.

Sanosuke
03-20-2007, 03:52 AM
^-^

KatandMouse
03-20-2007, 03:56 AM
Thanks guys! ^-^ Love you all! (Except Zelly. We all know I HATE her.)

z311y
03-20-2007, 03:57 AM
Grr....





























Lol.

Sanosuke
03-20-2007, 04:03 AM
lol

KatandMouse
03-20-2007, 04:13 AM
:lmao: You're easily irritated today... something up?