Hero

[Black Ashes]

(i know it's in my Profile but i wanted to know what all you peeps thought about it.)

A hero hides behind the door,
the one that comes to save your soul.
A hero hides under my bed,
the one that comes to save me,
from the men that love me.
A hero hides from me,
he fears that i hate him.
A hero that loves the way his victim,
Smells and Looks.
A Hero comes forth from the darkness,
and slits my throat, as i smile,
at his foolishness.
A hero Falls to the floor,
with a knife in his throat.
there's no such thing as hero's,
only ones that act like they can be one,
If they Try hard enough.
This Hero,
that My Friends see me as,
the one that kept them from killing themselves,
the one that was there for them when they needed it,
The one that they will always trust,
Just slit their throats,
And left them for Dead.
I will Never be this Hero,
they See inside Me.

[Sanosuke]

I think it's awesome. ^-^

[Black Ashes]

Sano..you think everything i write is awsome...i might as well write a book of all of them and send them to you..

[Sanosuke]

lol ^-^ Maybe. haha But yeah it's awesome. I mean I could never write like that.

[Black Ashes]

i'm thinking about writing a counter for it...

[Sanosuke]

Hmmm well either way. I'd like to see it. :)

[Black Ashes]

i'll post it on here if i do write it, just so you can see it, k?

[Sanosuke]

Okay. :) Cool. ^-^

[staticgrave666]

Thats really good i wish I could write like that lol

[Black Ashes]

thanks Kira

[Sanosuke]

I know huh? You're way good Black. ^-^

[staticgrave666]

And with that sano and I are the first members of your honorary fan club lol

[Black Ashes]

*laughs* or you could join the one that's at school! ^-^ i've writen about four books of my poems for my friends already. i keep updateing them like every week! it's hecktic sometimes

[staticgrave666]

It sounds hectic, I wasn't joking about the fan club however.....

[Black Ashes]

*laughs* ok, what ever will float your boat Kira

[staticgrave666]

are you saying you won't enjoy a fanclub fine then you don't get one lol

[Black Ashes]

i was just saying that i already had one...and that you could join there numbers...but if you don't want to be in my fan club you don't have to be. that's why i said what ever float's your boat..

[Hion]

Where is Kira?????

[KatandMouse]

Yay! Three cheers for Black! :lmao: I always say that. ^-^ It really is good, though.

[Black Ashes]

Static's name is kira, and thanks k@

[Kosugi]

That's pretty good! Thumbs up!
:D

[Black Ashes]

Thanks but it's not my best

[CoreyBato]

It was a really great poem. I can write stories pretty okay, but I wish I could write poems as good as you do.