I Hate You

[KatandMouse]

"The flames that burn in my soul;
They consume me,
Eat me,
Kill me.

I hate you.
I hate that which makes me burn.
That which makes me catch fire.

You eat me from the inside-out:
I hate you.

You're trying to kill me,
And you don't even realize it.

I hate you.

Rain will not put you out,
My anger only gives you power.
His anger is no use, either.

Then why?
Why do I love you?

I hate you.

Pain and sorrow,
That is what you cause.
As I burn you watch;
Watch and laugh.

I hate you.

So why do I love you?"

:lmao: I was listening to "I Hate Everything About You" by Three Days Grace when I wrote THAT one. :lmao:

[Black Ashes]

you love me,
because i love you back.
i laugh,
because it is yourself that makes you burn.

[KatandMouse]

It is hate that makes the flames,
Isn't it?
It is hate that makes me love you,
Isn't it?
It's because I hate you that I burn.
And because I love you that I hate you.
Isn't it?

(:lmao: Wow... it's fun to write poems back and forth. ^-^)

[Black Ashes]

(now you know why me and kira do that all the time!)
it is hate that makes you burn,
but the hate is not for me.
it is hate that fuels the flames,
but i didn't make you hate me.
it is hate that makes you love me,
but you placed the hate before the love.

[Sanosuke]

Man, You two can come up with poems out of nothing. lol It's awesome. ^-^

[KatandMouse]

Then why do I hate you?
What makes me love you?
Save me.
I am scared,
I am confused.
Why do I hate you?
Why do I love you?
Please...
Save me...

(:lmao: It's not that hard... ^-^)

[Black Ashes]

i would save you,
but you once said you could save yourself.
you love me,
because i love you back.
you hate me,
because you made it that way.

[KatandMouse]

So the fire is because of hate?
It is hate that fuels the flames?
But why do I hate you?
What made me hate you?
I cannot remember.
I do not know why.
I love you.
Is that why I hate you?

[Black Ashes]

you did not want to love me,
that is why you hate me.
little one,
with so many questions,
many can be answered by yourself.

[KatandMouse]

If I did not want to love you,
Then why do I?
I hate you,
But I also love you.

The flames will kill me soon,
Unless I leave this hate behind.
So I ask you,
Can we go our seperate ways in peace?
End the love,
And end the hate?

[Black Ashes]

you can do what you must,
but i will do what i want.

[KatandMouse]

Please,
I ask you.
May we go our seperate ways in peace?
For I think it is the only way to end the hate,
And the flames that burn me.

[Black Ashes]

as i said,
do what you must.

[KatandMouse]

Goodbye,
Then,
My friend.
I leave you,
The hate,
And the love,
Behind.
The flames will leave me,
Now.
And if they ever return...
I will KILL them.

[Black Ashes]

if it is what you must do,
then it is done.
you will leave the love,
and the hate behind.
i would of never left,
even if it killed me.

[KatandMouse]

You said that I hated you because I wasn't supposed to love you.
Doesn't that mean that I should leave?
Shouldn't I go,
Go and love the one I am supposed to?
Or does this hate I feel come with love?
Is it a part of it?
Or a part of me...?

[Black Ashes]

i said you hated me,
because you loved me,
you loved me,
because i loved you back.
and those question's can not be answered,
by me.

[KatandMouse]

So it is the love that causes the hate?
That causes the flames that threaten to kill me?
If love goes hand in hand with hate,
Then why do you love me through it all?

[Black Ashes]

i love you through it all,
because it is my love for you that keeps me going.

[KatandMouse]

I hated you.
And the fire burned me.
Now I stop to think,
And the fire does not touch me.
It does not touch me because I have realized,
I will always love you more than I hate you.
And the only reason I hate you,
Is because I do love you.

[Black Ashes]

then you have finally realized,
your true feelings.
i'm glad,
that they have been realized.
now we can be happy.

[KatandMouse]

Yes.
The hate will cower in a corner,
The flames dare not harm me,
And my love for you runs free.

[Black Ashes]

okay...that was fun! ^-^

[KatandMouse]

:lmao: Yeah. That was really fun. Since I always come up with the poems right away it was easy, too. Cause they're usually off the top of my head. ^-^

[Black Ashes]

hey! all mine were too!! ^-^ was it just me or was i the guy in that situation?

[KatandMouse]

:lmao: I don't know... I guess... cause I was originally planning on being a girl with the first one... :lmao:

[Black Ashes]

*laughs* nice!! ^-^

[BeatleMania]

that was all really good to just come of the top of your head

[hungrykirby]

that was awsome and cool

[Kosugi]

I'd say it was a pretty good poem, and you keep making more on this thread. Make some more! :D