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KatandMouse
03-18-2007, 07:28 AM
"The shackles that bind her are tighter than you can imagine.
Do you know why they bind her?
They are tied to her soul.
If she tried to escape she would tear herself apart from inside.

Kill her...

It's what she wants.
I swear.

Kill her...

She feels the pain of suffering and loneliness.
Will someone deliver her from her plight?
Save her frome despair?
A hero, perhaps?

She wants to be free.
Be dead...?
Yes, that is fine.
Anywhere but here, she says.

If you were dead you couldn't be chained,
Chained to that which you would rather not be.

So kill her...

She begs of you.
Release her from these chains which bind.
Release her from these chains she has put on herself.
The chains that are her sorrow.
Release her...

So kill her..."

Er... I think I was MAD when I wrote that... if I had to guess... :lmao:

Sanosuke
03-18-2007, 07:30 AM
Hmmm wow. haha Wow. ^-^

staticgrave666
03-18-2007, 07:30 AM
Wow, it almost comes off as suicidal are you ok?

Black Ashes
03-18-2007, 07:31 AM
i wouldn't dare kill,
the one that holds their own.
i will set you free,
by freeing your soul.
your soul is the thing that is truely chained,
not your person.
something like this is easy to fix,
but you have to work with me,
to fix the problem.
let the mind be erased,
of the things that haunt it.
let the body be nothing but a cloud,
moving away and breaking apart.
let the soul grow wings,
and fly away.
the thing that is broken,
is nothing more than a fixed pot.

KatandMouse
03-18-2007, 07:31 AM
Yup. I'm fine. I just tend to write depressing stuff... it makes me feel better. I don't know why...

Yay! Three cheers for Black Ashes!!! W00T!!!!!!!! :lmao:

Sanosuke
03-18-2007, 07:32 AM
Yeah I was sorta thinking that too. But she said she was mad when she wrote that.

Black Ashes
03-18-2007, 07:34 AM
*laughs* thanks k@! ^-^

Akito
03-18-2007, 06:43 PM
WazZupP

Anime_Demoness
03-19-2007, 09:15 PM
it was nice..but i think you were more sad than mad when you wrote it ~s~

Kosugi
04-06-2007, 04:29 AM
Are you sure you're fine?
If so, good poem, if not, be carefull

Anastashia Sage
04-06-2007, 04:35 AM
good Job, i thinks its cool.