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As I lay here I'm in Pain,
Pain from nothing,
No one to blame,
It's making me hollow,
Feelng me with sorrow,
Agony without pain,
Is like a storm without rain,
At first it's small an unnoticed,
It soon grows and tears everything away,
My tears turn grey,
I see my mistakes,
It's me who caused my pain.
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 05:44 AM
Very nice Hion. ^^
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 05:49 AM
You're welcome. :)
I all of a sudden have a need to write
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 06:30 AM
:lmao:
Siziol
02-15-2007, 09:46 PM
Very emotastic Hion. ^^
-_-
Black Ashes
02-16-2007, 12:20 AM
i know the feeling. you seem to inspire me to Hion.
Black Ashes
02-16-2007, 12:31 AM
:lmao: hey:naughty:
ZeroEverlast
02-16-2007, 01:07 AM
"It's me who caused my pain"?
It's good thing you does written poetry like with correct proper a syntax!
KatandMouse
02-16-2007, 01:55 AM
Wow, that was awesome! Sorta sad, but good.
Siziol
02-16-2007, 03:02 AM
"It's me who caused my pain"?
It's good thing you does written poetry like with correct proper a syntax!
I give you props for even bothering to read it. I saw multiple emo references and decided it was instantly unreadable.
Thats your opinion so say what you want
ZeroEverlast
02-16-2007, 03:48 AM
I give you props for even bothering to read it. I saw multiple emo references and decided it was instantly unreadable.
Sorry, mate, I'm afraid I'll have to return those props. I skimmed the poem at a glance and decided it was probably akin to Linkin Park lyrics and hence weren't really worth reading.
The last line just sort of caught my attention and snagged due to the shaky syntax.
I dont even listen to linkin park dude but like i just said i dont care what you say it's your opinion
edelricluver
02-19-2007, 10:44 PM
Nice Work, Hion. :)
KiraKill
02-20-2007, 01:18 AM
hmm.....hion.......black told me you wanted to talk to me....i'm here now.
ZeroEverlast
02-20-2007, 01:36 AM
.... I Apoligize...
For writing that poem, huh? Yeah, I bet you feel pretty rotten right about now.
It's okay though, it's not that bad.
Black Ashes
02-20-2007, 01:38 AM
no, something that happened last night.
KiraKill
02-20-2007, 01:39 AM
.... I Apoligize...
do you really mean that?.....i accept....
so what were you really mad at me for?
I'm still mad at you but I think I over reacted
KiraKill
02-20-2007, 01:41 AM
but why were you mad at me?
Black Ashes
02-20-2007, 01:42 AM
I'm still mad at you but I think I over reacted
you think?
ZeroEverlast
02-20-2007, 01:44 AM
Woe is me! My priceless sense of humour is wasted on you drama queens!
I leave you to your tragedy.
Black Ashes
02-20-2007, 01:46 AM
no don't do that, please don't do that.
z311y
02-20-2007, 01:52 AM
Woe is me! My priceless sense of humour is wasted on you drama queens!
I leave you to your tragedy.
I think it was really funny... The poem was good Hion, but, very to Linkin Park lyrics, that is true.
z311y
02-20-2007, 02:00 AM
Sorry hion...
Sanosuke
02-20-2007, 02:22 AM
Hmmmmm.
El Wiseguy
02-20-2007, 03:19 AM
Don't apologize. You didn't do anything wrong.
AnimeYahtzee3
02-20-2007, 03:21 AM
ya!
Black Ashes
02-20-2007, 03:24 AM
yeah but Hion did...
z311y
02-20-2007, 03:59 AM
Hion did what?
Black Ashes
02-20-2007, 04:01 AM
go to the paige before this one and read it.
UniversalTwilight
02-20-2007, 05:31 AM
You show real talent Hion.