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Black Ashes
02-13-2007, 02:19 AM
falling through,
this place and time.
falling and can't get up.
i'm surrounded by the tears of my pack.
i hear them howl my name.
i'm chained down to the darkness,
and i can't wiggle out.
my nose and my tail,
chained and not coming free.
my ears,
withered away long ago.
my teeth are dule,
and my eyes blind.
my nails too long and broken.
i'm chained down to the darkness,
and i can't even move,
my strength failed me long ago.
i want to run,
i want to hide.
i'm scared and there's no where i can go.
pain is my only companion,
suffering my only friend.
falling through,
this place and time.
falling and can't get up
surrounded by the tears of my pack,
as they watch me struggle to run.
his hand finds me and i'm down for the count.
whatever strength i once had,
is obliterated in one move.
what ever rank i had,
taken so easily.
my beauty,
my grace,
all put to shame,
by someone so rough.
my pack howls my name one last time,
as i take my final breath.
i drown in my on misery,
trying to fight it away.
images fill my head,
images of your happy face.
the images abliterate,
as everything dies away.
lost in the end.
Anastashia Sage
02-13-2007, 02:20 AM
Nice.. i kinda feel that way now too...
Sanosuke
02-13-2007, 03:03 AM
Beautiful black. :)
Black Ashes
02-13-2007, 03:06 AM
thanks sano.
Akito
02-15-2007, 12:40 AM
Wow you are a very poetic person Black. :)
*claps*
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 12:55 AM
*laughs* been that way for a long time. the first poem i ever wrote was for class and it was about a little kid being hit by a car. i was supposed to look at a picture and get what i felt from it and that's what it made me feel! ^-^
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 12:57 AM
Yeah bro, she's one of the best poets I've ever seen.
Keep it up black. :thumbs:
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:07 AM
oh thanks Sano. i'm not the best though. there are way better poets out there. i'm actually teaching my friend to write. and if you ask me Hion got a side for poetry too..*smiles*
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:12 AM
Hion writes poems too?
I wanna hear one.
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:13 AM
*laughs* i don't think he's wiling to share! ^-^ so shhhhh!!
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:16 AM
Hey, I wrote one to Suki for Valentine's day.
You wanna hear it?
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:16 AM
yeah sure! ^-^
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:19 AM
You are the love of my life
I hope that someday you would be my wife
You are the hope of my dreams
With your help they will come true it would seem
You are the spark of my motivation
The love of my temptation
You are the light of my day
You make me happy in every way
You're all I think about morning and night
I love you with all my might
All the things we do
Nothing in my life could ever stand above you.
What do you think?
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:22 AM
it's sweet! ^-^
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:24 AM
Thanks. :)
And I only wrote one poem
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:26 AM
I wanna hear it. :)
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:27 AM
I wanna hear black. :)
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:29 AM
....um...should i??
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:35 AM
okay...
here it is. it's called Dream
You are My Broken Dream,
At first you seemed Mean,
But then We boned,
Now I feel haunted,
It hurt others around,
My knees hit the ground,
Tears fall from my eyes,
Only Darkness Cries,
I am your Fire,
You are my Ashes,
I want to hold you close,
And burn away your fears,
And please don't forget,
The life we are to live,
Let me be your God,
And you'll be my Goddess,
Let me be your Dragon,
And protect my Treasure,
With the flames that made you,
I'll protect you,
You are my Completed Dream.
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:37 AM
Wow, that's Good! :)
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:39 AM
of course it's good!!
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:41 AM
Dude of course it's good! :thumbs:
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:47 AM
:lookweird:
kool with :) :) as the oo
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:49 AM
:lmao:
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:50 AM
....yeah....
I might rite another poem for you ^-^
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:53 AM
^-^ YAY!! *happy dance*
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:54 AM
Woot! *dances around too*
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 01:55 AM
*laughs* why are you dancing Sano?
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 01:59 AM
cuz I felt like it. ^-^
YaY!!! Happy dance
http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w115/Lord_Hion/thvegetadance.gif
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 02:04 AM
:lmao: dude I luv that gif! :D
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 02:10 AM
No.
:eek:
Dont hit me :eek:
*Hides in corner*
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 02:16 AM
i didn't hit you!!! .....*looks down at the ground and shuffles feet*...
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 02:17 AM
:lmao:
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 02:20 AM
:( and yet i don't feel better...Fo Realz...:lmao:
You said it wrong it goes Fo Rizzeal
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 02:23 AM
Shizzle to MY nizzle! woot! :lmao:
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 02:24 AM
You said it wrong it goes Fo Rizzeal
nope i say it Fo Realz cause i want to..^-^
...oh boys...
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 02:27 AM
what?
Black Ashes
02-15-2007, 02:29 AM
*shakes head* bye guys. i gotsta goes...
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 02:30 AM
See ya black. *waves*
I Like to eat CupCake :naughty:
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 02:31 AM
That sounds nasty. :lmao:
Sanosuke
02-15-2007, 02:34 AM
Laters, I gotta go eat dinner. I'll be back though.
Black Ashes
02-16-2007, 12:22 AM
I Like to eat CupCake :naughty:
What?!?!